correct my mistake! 2024.

سلام و عليكم
شو اخباركم يا شباب !
انا من كم يوم بدات اتمرن اللغه الانجليزيه بجديه !
و كل يوم اكتب افكاري باللغخه الانجليزيه !
بس عندما كنت اريد ان اكتب ماذا اريد ان افعل آخر اسبوع بس اختياراتي كانت مسدودة !
بس بالاخر كتبت كله ب (going to ) وانا سوف اضع لكم الي كتبته

In the morning the alarm clock will be rings.Then i’m going to turn off the alarm clock.Then i’m going to get up,then i’m going to walk to the bathroomand when i arrive to the bathroom i’m going to wash my my face and brush my teeth.

when i finish of bathroom i’m going to the kitchen to eat breakfast and drink a cup of coffee,then i’m going to do exercises,then i’m going to look in the mirror,then i shave my beard,then i’m going to go back to the bathroom take a shower.

After this i’m going to watch tv.Whenever i’m exhausted of watching tv i’m going to prepare myself to go out.Then u’m going to put on my clothes ,then i’m going to comb my hair & i’m going to say good-by to mt parents.

Indeed my weekends are always filled with something to do,but this weekend i’m going to take time to relax with my friends.Then i want going to attending the athletic events with my friends, butxceptionally i will go with my brother.

After this i’m going to an amusement park becausi’m having reunionwith my bes friends.

بس ياريت يا شباب تصححون مشكلاتي و القواعد
و انا ما عرفت اكتب الا مع going to
هل يوجد اي مساعده؟

شكرا لمحاولتك الكتابة واستخدامك لزمن واحد فقط يضعف الموضوع ولايفي بالغرض .كوني مدرسة لغة انكليزية حولت أن أصحح لك على هواك واعطائك فكرة عن الأختصار لعدم وضع القارىء بحالة الملل .حاول أن تستفيد من أدوات ترتيب الجمل وجعلها متسلسلة باستخدام مثلا :first ,second,third ,fourth …….last or finally

.In the morning ,my alarm is going to ring so I’m going to turn it off and get up
First , I will go to the bathroom to wash my hands and my face .Second, I brush my teeth .Third,I will go to the kitchen to have my breakfast andtwo cups of coffee.Fourth, I will go to do my excercises.Then I shave my beard and have a shower .After that I take abreak and watch T.V. for atime .When I feel bored of that I prepare myself to go out .being ready , I say good bye to my parents
Indeed ,in my weekends I have always lots of things to do ,but this one I want to spend with my friends.Sometimes we attend the atheletic events .Except for this weekend ,I’m going to attend them with my brother
Finally ,I’m going to go to an amusement park to meet some of my dear friends

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